PROTOTYPE-1 – Feedback and Review
I had my first major critique of the project two weeks ago which conjured some interesting responses to the project, there are several issues I will need to work out upon further iteration of this project. Some of the feedback I received included:
– The information presented was too fast to absorb
-There was too much information conveyed, maybe focus on a few issues
-Maybe directly address adults in animation
-Minute long PSAs are too long. Make them shorter, more specific, and more of them
-Too much movement on the screen
-Consider formats- Where do I want my work shown?
-There are disconnected elements in the animation, there is little flow of the piece
-Redo the song or experiment with a new song, just to change it up a little
-This is a PSA to the T – be more creative, because there is something ignorable about this
– This view is picturesque of the country, where is the problem really?
as you can see, my project got ripped, which is actually fine because I have realized I need to get more creative with this.
I have taken several screenshots ofthe comments I received from several people about the facebook event that I created to watch the animation. Many of them I knew, but there were also a few that i didnt that were able to respond and give me feedback which was really helpful. With this project, i am going to try and reach out to an audience I don’t know but who is interested in the approaches I am taking.